Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Queen Victoria's Crown By Megan

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh" screamed the two twins. Once they had explained their dream to their to their two brothers, Joseph who was three and David who was fifteen and both fiddlers they noticed it was true because when the went into their parents room they weren't there! One of the children even fainted it became a real problem because After Dylan had fainted their was a long two year struggle to get through with out Dylan. In two years time the second "Ahhhhhhhhhhhh" (But in a deep voice) in this story it was coming from Dylan. The kids ran out from the kitchen and greeted Dylan in the most cheerful scream. "I haven't seen you since, since well I can't remember actually". "Ohhhhhhhh thank goodness your here" said Dylan "ah duh" said Alice and Alia. "We have been here two years with you stinking up the house". "Didan Didan bath bath" said Joseph running out with his nappy full. "Yeah Joseph is right we may need to get you a bath the flies have been around you for months" said Alice and Alia. "Up you hop." Wait!" I had the strangest dream and you were all in it". "I know who has our parents, evil Queen Victoria." By the time Dylan had explained his whole dream the girl devised a plan. Alice and Alia were twelve by now and were old enough to get their licence to fight evil Queen Victoria. The twins who had identical clothes looks personalities and powers went to the police department with their brothers in the smokey fire death cell. Cough cough. I think this place needs some air freshener we better go the supermarket and get air wick eye motion. Said Dylan. "Hello can I help you" said the register attender in a extremely croaking voice. "Um yes for a start you can turn off the fake atmosphere Queen Victoria's guards aren't coming." "Yet." added Joseph still with a full nappy. "Sorry" said Megan the runner of the armor store. As soon as the fake atmosphere was turn of by a yellow switch of the counter the whole room filled with butterflies, rainbows and a whole bunch of funny shaped clouds. "We are going to fight the evil Queen we need armor and our parent red and blue power necklaces, our plan is to be her guards well her crown polishers actually". Said Alice and Alia fiddling with their purple sneaker t-shirts and heir denim skirts and pink tights. How many people need two armor said Joseph holding up his fingers with the number three on it. "O.K "laughed Megan.' That will be ten dollars". "Um we didn't have any money since our parents died." Said Dylan with tears rolling out his eyes. "OH I am sorry said Megan". "No charge it's on the house" "Thanks" "no thank you.O.K" "now that that's done we go to step two" Said Alia the first time without her sister.Boys remember to grab the fake crown. When you get in the dungeon tell everybody in their what we are doing and try and unlock the secret window under the spider web of death. If you do unlock it some help us but feed Mum and Dad first. "Lets do it" they all shouted. The twins announced that they would go first and say the were the crown polishers. Yep replied Dylan with his brown combed hair and his fancy black and white tux to make a great impression to their parents. Meanwhile the Alice and Alia were already down the haunted hall of misery the appeared out of the smokey fire and were looking straight at evil Queen Victoria's door. It was black and it had spider webs all over it with tarantulas venomous spiders and mosquitoes. "Ow" screeched Alia as she got bitten by one of the venomous spiders. Instantly they started swelling up like Augustus off charlie and the chocolate factory. Hide your fat under your armor the reply Alice got was a big................. but you could see Alia was going to kill her when she stopped swelling up by the frown on her face.Alice open the door slowly let Alia waddle in first. She could at least have one nice the happen to her in this story right? "What are you doing" shouted the queen in a 60's motherly voice. "W-w-we are the n-n-n-n-n." well spit it out. "new crown polishers" squeaked Alice. "Here take it I need it back in an hour with a cup of coffee from McDonald's and don't be late or it's the dungeon for both of you." said the queen in her red and black venomous blood dress. Slam. the kids were already out the door and were half way down the hall and were ready to slap the boys hand just like we do in class relays. Once the had slapped their hands the boys were off and the girls kept running far far away even out of rainbow world and in to the armor store then through the short cut door and were then in the smokey fire forest haunted with fire breathing dragons and even the smallest spark could kill you.The were running away because the Queen can't live without her crown for more than an hour and Dylan saw this in his dream. Back at the hall of misery the boys had just walked into the Queens castle and the Queen switched her security camera to the door camera and saw the two boys walking in "IMPOSTER'S" she cried. Dylan gripped onto Joseph and jumped over the Queens royal bed and started opening her draws to find her trap crown after them guards as soon as the kids grabbed the crown the queen said "wait" just when the guards were going to stab the kids with the spears. Suddenly the kids disappeared and fell right into the dungeon onto their parents Mum Dad they had just explained what had happened to their parents while the time was ticking away with the Queen 5 minutes left the girls still in the forest had just noticed their was someone following their tracks the dragon was right behind them "aaaaaahhhhhhh" they screamed and ran right up a tree by this time five minutes was over for the queen and everybody in their family knew it was almost time for their three year dreams to come true three two one they all counted and then poof the dungeon door opened and the dragon went away and all the things the queen took began on the good people side and as for the and turned the Queens crown into gold for al the good people in the world until someone else slipped into the leftover Queens dress to be continued.........

1 comment:

isabelllla said...

Wow megan what a brilliant story and also long hehehehehehehehehehe