Monday, November 1, 2010

Hollie's Tiger and scery dream~!!!!

"AAAHHHHHH sorry" once upon a time there were two girls that were twins.The two twins are called Hollie and Maxime.They had the same dreams all the time but this dream was the most scariest dream in their whole life.It was about this bright green tiger that had bright blue eyes and the tiger was looking straight at both of them and it looked freaky.It came running to eat them all up and when it did eat them up their mum and dad were terrified to see them eaten up.So when they woke up it was fine their was no tiger their to eat them up.They came running into their mum and dads bedroom at once.When they came running into their mum and dads room they were jumping up and down on their bed trying to wake them up.But they don't wake up.So they went back to their bed and you will never guess their was a bright green tiger with bright blue eyes in their bedroom after all "NO"! called their parents as they were running down the hallway but the tiger ate them all up.GOOD BYE SEE YOU
SOON!!!

BY:Hollie

3 comments:

Twelve2010 said...

Love your imagination Hollie. I really enjoyed reading your story. Mrs Pram

Holle said...

Thanks Mrs Pram for reading my story.I MISS YOU SO MUCH.

isabella said...

Lovely story and remember to go look up the words like scery it is scary and what such a perfect story
bravo superb hollie well done






Isabella