Angel
First...
Final...
Cassidy
First...
Final...
Dean
First...
Final...
Note... The words are in grey because with telescopic text you can click on them and it shows you the change that we made to that word or part of our writing.
Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Telescopic Text #1
This week we used telescopic text to add ideas, describing words and edit our writing. Unfortunately we couldn't save our work but we took screen shots to show our first and final holiday writing examples. We are really proud of the work that we did!
Angel
First...
Final...
Cassidy
First...
Final...
Dean
First...
Final...
Note... The words are in grey because with telescopic text you can click on them and it shows you the change that we made to that word or part of our writing.
Angel
First...
Final...
Cassidy
First...
Final...
Dean
First...
Final...
Note... The words are in grey because with telescopic text you can click on them and it shows you the change that we made to that word or part of our writing.
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4 comments:
I never realised that there was a web site where you could write your own telescopic text. WE will have to have a go at that.
Allanah K
Moturoa Class
Appleby School
Nelson
Wow you guys did great at telescopic text I wish we could do it again!!!!
:)
telescopic text is fun. I hope you had fun doing telescopic text.
Well Done Angel and Dean.
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